Thursday, August 2, 2012

spider-man and dare devil redesign

Hi everyone! I drew this tonight and had to stay up until I could get it painted. It's almost 4 in the morning so I'm not sure how awesome it really is so any feedback would be great. Thanks a million!

2 comments:

  1. I hardly know how to articulate what I want to say, but I'll try... The smoke is really neat and adds some subtle drama. I think, conceptually, it may help if the villain is dark-on-light and the heroes are light on dark- so maybe have the villain sort of coming out of the dark with creepy under-lighting and the heroes are sort-of "halo lit" as they come forward out of the dark. I also think the formatting could use some attention. Perhaps crop it in a bit and have more edges touching? Or maybe make it into a movie poster? My rep always tells me to try to show how it could be used.
    I also think Spiderman could use some more detail and contouring- especially his eyes.
    I think it was hard for me to critique because it's so close to "being there". Great work posting so often too, Randy! Hope that was helpful.

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  2. Very helpful, thank you! I'll be giving it some more attention now that I'm fully conscious

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