Sweet Randy. How'd you get the model to float though? :) Here's a real critique, the two curves at the end of her ponytail are the same size. Watch out for that.
Dude, you're getting pretty dang good at rendering stuff. I'm loving the colors and everything. I've only got 2 things to say...1) Her face looks a little too masculine. She might be a super rough chick but she should still have some femininity to her facial features. So, having said that, I would definitely loose the brow that juts out. I think the nose could be slimmed up some to. Just a thought.2) Try erasing some of your lines, especially in the shadow of her dress area. I like the lines but I think you should erase some and leave some.Your stuff is sweet lately!